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T-Jay's Poem

Postby tjay76 » Wed Apr 04, 2012 1:11 am

This was inspired by John Davidson's 2009 Documentry as John wanted 'one measly day' without symptoms, and Greg did have one such day.

I hope and pray for a perfect day,
A day with no shaking,
A day with no swearing,
A day with no Twitching,
That would be a perfect day.

I hope and pray for a perfect day,
A day with no obsessions,
A day with no compulsions,
A day with no rtualistic actions,
That too would be a perfect day.

I hope and pray for a perfect day,
A day with no coprolalia,
A day with no echolalia,
A day with no paliphenomena,
That also would be a perfect day.

I haven't had a 'perfect day' for 12 years now,
12 years of depression,
8 years od distorted sleep,
2 years of of OCD,
10 months of Tourette's Syndrome.

These are my days now,
All I want is one day
I hope and pray for that day.

Jeez - I have just read it - I think yesterday was a 'bad day!' :?
I'm still T-Jay, but a bit shaky and I swear a lot!
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Re: T-Jay's Poem

Postby twinmum » Wed Apr 04, 2012 12:16 pm

Its really good T-jay
There are a few other poems on here have you seen them? perhaps one day someone will put them all in a book. ;)
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Re: T-Jay's Poem

Postby tjay76 » Wed Apr 11, 2012 3:03 pm

I did read them, hense the reason why I posted my poem.

I did however have problems with my 'Latin Verse', getting my symptoms AND the latin to stay in the flow of the stanza (OMG College/Uni speak!!!!!) was a bit of an issue!!
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Re: T-Jay's Poem

Postby Devon » Thu Apr 12, 2012 3:45 pm

Thanks for the poem TJay, I read it out to a friend and I had tears in my eyes, it brought back so many memories. If I could take it away from all of you I would do it today, but then I guess we would not be such brilliant caring wonderful loving people, just dull normal ones.
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Re: T-Jay's Poem

Postby George » Tue Aug 14, 2012 7:09 pm

this poem is great it really makes me think
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